Miles apart from my love,
I feel like reaching there as dove.
Unspoken words are also loud,
Faith on my choice makes me proud.
The first thought when I wake up is YOU,
And you know the feeling is so true.
Your care for me makes me feel wanted,
Feels like lord made my wish granted.
I am waiting for the day,we will be together,
When there will be no distance and spaces to bother.
Hiding these feelings is an ardous task,
But we still hide them in our friendly mask.
This relation is beautiful,no doubt,
Lets give it a chance to sprout.
I feel like reaching there as dove.
Unspoken words are also loud,
Faith on my choice makes me proud.
The first thought when I wake up is YOU,
And you know the feeling is so true.
Your care for me makes me feel wanted,
Feels like lord made my wish granted.
I am waiting for the day,we will be together,
When there will be no distance and spaces to bother.
Hiding these feelings is an ardous task,
But we still hide them in our friendly mask.
This relation is beautiful,no doubt,
Lets give it a chance to sprout.
Saloni Mittal
Nice composition...u hv really placed yr words well...nice to read a simple and short one... :)
ReplyDeleteawesome poetry!
ReplyDeleteWow!!A gr8 piece!!
ReplyDeletelove d line "unspoken words are also loud"!!
gr8 poetry!!!
ReplyDeleted initial stage of love!!
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ReplyDeletewow sal u can write too... nice:)
ReplyDeletenice nice...short n chweet..!!
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ReplyDeleteThe relation is really beautiful... Nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteGood poem.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteu write????..... nice poetry
ReplyDeletewow...beautiful poem saloni :)
ReplyDeleteshort n sweet..these days poems filled with love is the favorite flavor in Mody i think.. :)
ReplyDeletelovely....simple n sweet:):)
ReplyDeleteAwesome.....lovely
ReplyDeletekya baat h salloni !!!
ReplyDeleteis this the true reflection??
butifl composition. :))
good work...
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written :)
ReplyDeletereally good poetry:)
ReplyDeleteits beautiful <3
ReplyDeletehey bos.. i feel every line has a deep meaning in it..very tru..right frm da heart! "i feel like reaching there as dove" n 'The first thought when I wake up is YOU'
ReplyDeleteitsa...umm..lovely... :)
wow!! so beautifully written...vry deep n meaningful..absolutely fabulous n heart touching..superlike..!! :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome poetry.
ReplyDeleteTruly depicts the feeling of being in love.:)
saloni boss rilli awesome!!
ReplyDeletevery true feelings...:)
saloni is it u????
ReplyDeletelovely re!!!!
@Awl
ReplyDeleteThank you !! thanks a lot..
@Mitali and Sakhsi..Thanks for giving it a title :)
PS: This one is my first..but ur comments did inspire me to write more :):)
VERY THOUGHTFULL.........but digressing from the origional topic........................
ReplyDeletesure one should give love a try but one thing shld always be kept in mind dat
NEVER READY A BOOK JUST BCOZ IT HAS A FANCY COVER............................................................................................................GET TO KNOW THE AUTHOR N HIS WRITING STYLE FIRST
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ELSE LOVELY POETRY <3
really liked it..short nd sweet..!! :)
ReplyDeletenice 1 :)
ReplyDeletea very nice poem...
ReplyDeletesaloni i did'nt know dat u cud write so beautifully....
ReplyDeletegrt wrk....
beautiful!
ReplyDeletelovely..:)
ReplyDeleteGud1....well i guess the transition of these feelings into a mature relationship is the most beautiful face of one's life.....:)
ReplyDeleteits beautiful!! :)
ReplyDeleteNice
ReplyDelete:)
awesome... :)
ReplyDeletevery nyc ! :)
ReplyDeletereally nice.. :)
ReplyDeletevary nice composition :)
ReplyDeletenice poem.......... :)
ReplyDeleteluvd it...!!
ReplyDeleteamazing poetry....
really nice!!!
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