Unperturbed and undone
With thoughts floating around
I sit touched on the ground
I have a million things to do
I’m bounded , I know , I’m sound
There were words left said
And words you need to know
Words that sailed through
And words that drowned before I let them go
There were musings of my own
I always have them close
I abide by their certain ways
They breach rules often , more then I know
Then there were actions
That kindled and moved souls
Caressed my hunger of thoughts
And caused some more to follow
With heights that I attain
Even while settled low
I could engrave emotions
Minding all within, and all those meant to throw
I have around me
People , sage and devils ,therein
Its actions that checked the moves
And moves that lead me to know
I chase things I wanted
And get rid of those that chase me
For all they do is cage a person
Let me go, I am not your own
I thought I would write my mind
But there is one thing that I know
There are still a myriad facets left
Unperturbed and undone
They forever plan to remain so !
Superb! Sakshi dis is one of da most beautiful poems i hav read latly...sumwer or da oder it has each one of ur talking...very wel writen...i giv Miss Deputy full points for dis one... :)
ReplyDeletethank u boss!!! lv ya!!!
ReplyDeletedis is wonderful poem...and all assignments r too creative...heads off to ruchi boss and all the members of enginium
ReplyDeletehey sakshi ..all i can say is excellent!!! work dear ..beautiful poem ..wid wonderful use of imagery ..its truly 'esoteric'..!!!
ReplyDeletehehe....thanx...lets see what the others have to say :)
ReplyDeletethanks Neha...but da poem is written by our dearest Sakshi...so hats off to her!!!
ReplyDeleteSakshi its a beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteWe feel proud!
thnx saumya!!
ReplyDeletewonderful poem girl....keep goin!!!!
ReplyDeleteyaa..reallyy very nice....hatss off...ur work is appreciable...:)
ReplyDeletethank u :) !!
ReplyDeletethanx fr reading n commenting!!
nice 1 sakshi!!alwys luved ur wrk yar...u rock!!!!
ReplyDeletethanx charu !! :)
ReplyDeletethis is what makes me ur biggest fan on the fce of earth,..nw u kno who i m..excellnt piece i must say..
ReplyDeletei know i cant gr8 poems like u boss bt ur poems inspire me 2 write..a wonderful poem boss :)
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Hi Sakshi, its a great poem and the blog looks great guys. The look, the posts the professionalism, everything about the blog is impressive.
ReplyDeleteSakshi, I am so glad you can still come up with something like this inspite of the gigantic pressure.
everyone thank u :)
ReplyDelete@ smriti boss - so glad to hear frm u n we're so glad u liked it!!
keep viewing ur enginium10 blog !! we'll keep cmin up wd new things !!
:)
love yaa!!
nice 1......... sakshi
ReplyDeletevery well framed.........
very nice poem
ReplyDeleteI chase things I wanted
And get rid of those that chase me
For all they do is cage a person
Let me go, I am not your own....
these lines r so nice.....lovely poem.keep it up.
thank u !!
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